Again, what the guys above me said; This is my first fed too and when I started Gator was pretty different and my RPs really, really sucked. I got better just through progression and reading other peoples RPs and learning from them. Also, if you ever lose a match, don't take it too hard, it's a learning experience and you can become better from them.

(10-13-2014, 05:27 PM)JillLorder Said: Oh God, my RP is shit. XD

Honestly, I'm sorry that you guys have to read through my crap. For some reason my brain isn't functioning well and the creative juices aren't flowing right today.

I feel like this every single time I post a RP and read through it. I think it's just a natural thing, so don't worry about it. And welcome