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08-17-2018, 05:53 PM

So this is my first attempt at writing a female character. I feel like things are beginning to click for me with this character, but would love to hear some feedback. Any and all feedback welcome, both good and bad.

THANKS!

http://xwf1999.com/showthread.php?tid=32126
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Feedback please? - by Vita Frickin Valenteen - 08-17-2018, 05:53 PM
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