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feedback of my 1st promo - Gamegenie - 04-07-2013
The Journey of the Nerd begin
Well i have just finished my first promo with Gamegenie and i would like to hears the though of anyone.
If you all enjoy it or if you think i need to improve something ^^.
The honesty of someone, is also welcome =).
feedback of my 1st promo - Sincere Lee Wild - 04-08-2013
Just read this one as well, I will admit it was very entertaining, I loved the banter between the narrator I thought it was very creative.
All roleplays need improvement because as writers we should all strive to do better each and every time we post a RP. Like I have said to everyone in the past make sure your spellcheck your RP's and just proof read them for things missing.
Amber
feedback of my 1st promo - Gamegenie - 04-08-2013
Thanks for your comment Amber, i'll do my best to be carefull on this next time =).
feedback of my 1st promo - C Y R E N - 04-08-2013
Overall, I was very pleased.
feedback of my 1st promo - Gamegenie - 04-09-2013
If Cyren is very pleased, then i'm glad he like it ^^.