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Feedback for 'Fuel.' Tips & criticisms welcome - Gator - 07-14-2014
Hey all,
So I just completed my first 'big' RP and I would really appreciate any feedback you guys can give me. I'll share a little info on my character Gator. He is a crazed and viscous heel who will do anything to win and scare his opponents, he was a fairly big star in Japan and is pissed off that he has to start from the ground up in the XWF. What Gator wants is to make an impact and get the attention he craves.
Fuel pt. 1 - http://xwf1999.com/showthread.php?tid=13567
(This is less of an RP and more of a intro or set up to Fuel 2 & 3)
Fuel pt. 2 - http://xwf1999.com/showthread.php?tid=13571
Fuel pt 3 - http://xwf1999.com/showthread.php?tid=13584
Any advice on how to improve my RPs would be greatly appreciated, I can handle criticism but please don't be too harsh, I only started doing this a few days ago so I'm still learning the ropes. Thank you for taking the time to read this.
- Eddie
EDIT: A big thank you to Shane (Reeve Alexandra Gordon) for the tips and advice on writing and making a great character to work with.